New Bleach Fanfic! Rukia-centered~
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tamabonotchiTitle: Leave Your Weaknesses
Fandom: Bleach, slight IchigoxRukia
Rating: Teen, nekkid Rukia
Disclaimer: Bleach by Kubo Tite-sensei. Mentions of ban kai, and Rukia's zanpakutou.
Summary: Leave your weaknesses." Rukia could hear the voice in front of her, but she saw nothing. Her body was cold, but she did not shiver- she could not.
Notes: This was just so fun to write- I couldn't stop last night! Since it was already past midnight, I decided to revise and clean it today. COMMENTARY BELOW; read the story first of course.
{It was darkness. Utter darkness. It's cold. Very cold.}
When I first thought of the idea of the story, it was like night time already. I actually was inspired by the fanfic Inner Hollow and Bleach itself with those chapters of when Ichigo was trying to achieve ban kai.
And one of the original ideas in my mind was Rukia naked. Yeah, I feel somewhat perverted, but the idea of her not having a cover and just being exposed in her mind sounded good and well- the idea of a naked Rukia walking around cold and in ice looked awesome.
I also had the thought of her in ice trying to get out very early. I thought of her reaching for Sode no Shirayuki then suddenly caught in her Hakuren attack ice. The ice is supposed to be everything holding her back, her weaknesses when fighting.
And the guilt and regret is kind of explained... All of the guilt and sorrow in her heart about Kaien's death, how she felt much better after killing Noveno Espada (still can't type his name without having to look it up) but I felt she could still be weak from everything, like she was during the Soul Society arc- because she recovers slow.
We thought that Rukia had resolved her guilt towards Kaien's death when she apologized to the Shibas and Kuukaku told her she forgave her, but that wasn't true- we go into the Hueco Mundo/Nakama arc and the entire chapters during her fight with Noveno Espada and she really didn't resolve her guilt.
And the talking from Shirayuki was another thought. But from the chapters of Ichigo achieving ban kai, your zanpakutou is materialized OUT of your inner world. Well, Rukia went IN her inner world, so I brought the issue of ban kai... Rukia has a lot to do if Kubo is going to give her a ban kai soon in the manga. Yoruichi says it takes at least 10 years to even get your zanpakutou to materialize, and I'm not sure how strong Rukia is, because the most recent indication of her strength is she is able to be a seated officer, but then Ikkaku has ban kai as a seated officer so I'm not sure...
Then the end was just for Ichiruki. Rukia probably had liked dropped dead when she entered her inner world, and Ichigo would be panicking. I'm thinking of writing another chapter in Ichigo's POV of everything for more IchiRuki. Yeah.
Rukia talking with Shirayuki in my idea, was Shirayuki would tell her to do something,and Rukia wouldn't obey. It's not until Shirayuki says her name, and Rukia instinctively obeys her.
Dude, that was really really fun. I don't know what's better- making stories like everyday that are average or decent, or being lazy for a long time and writing these stories I really like.
Fandom: Bleach, slight IchigoxRukia
Rating: Teen, nekkid Rukia
Disclaimer: Bleach by Kubo Tite-sensei. Mentions of ban kai, and Rukia's zanpakutou.
Summary: Leave your weaknesses." Rukia could hear the voice in front of her, but she saw nothing. Her body was cold, but she did not shiver- she could not.
Notes: This was just so fun to write- I couldn't stop last night! Since it was already past midnight, I decided to revise and clean it today. COMMENTARY BELOW; read the story first of course.
{It was darkness. Utter darkness. It's cold. Very cold.}
When I first thought of the idea of the story, it was like night time already. I actually was inspired by the fanfic Inner Hollow and Bleach itself with those chapters of when Ichigo was trying to achieve ban kai.
And one of the original ideas in my mind was Rukia naked. Yeah, I feel somewhat perverted, but the idea of her not having a cover and just being exposed in her mind sounded good and well- the idea of a naked Rukia walking around cold and in ice looked awesome.
I also had the thought of her in ice trying to get out very early. I thought of her reaching for Sode no Shirayuki then suddenly caught in her Hakuren attack ice. The ice is supposed to be everything holding her back, her weaknesses when fighting.
And the guilt and regret is kind of explained... All of the guilt and sorrow in her heart about Kaien's death, how she felt much better after killing Noveno Espada (still can't type his name without having to look it up) but I felt she could still be weak from everything, like she was during the Soul Society arc- because she recovers slow.
We thought that Rukia had resolved her guilt towards Kaien's death when she apologized to the Shibas and Kuukaku told her she forgave her, but that wasn't true- we go into the Hueco Mundo/Nakama arc and the entire chapters during her fight with Noveno Espada and she really didn't resolve her guilt.
And the talking from Shirayuki was another thought. But from the chapters of Ichigo achieving ban kai, your zanpakutou is materialized OUT of your inner world. Well, Rukia went IN her inner world, so I brought the issue of ban kai... Rukia has a lot to do if Kubo is going to give her a ban kai soon in the manga. Yoruichi says it takes at least 10 years to even get your zanpakutou to materialize, and I'm not sure how strong Rukia is, because the most recent indication of her strength is she is able to be a seated officer, but then Ikkaku has ban kai as a seated officer so I'm not sure...
Then the end was just for Ichiruki. Rukia probably had liked dropped dead when she entered her inner world, and Ichigo would be panicking. I'm thinking of writing another chapter in Ichigo's POV of everything for more IchiRuki. Yeah.
Rukia talking with Shirayuki in my idea, was Shirayuki would tell her to do something,and Rukia wouldn't obey. It's not until Shirayuki says her name, and Rukia instinctively obeys her.
Dude, that was really really fun. I don't know what's better- making stories like everyday that are average or decent, or being lazy for a long time and writing these stories I really like.
