Chapter 7 of Hinata's Story is out!
May. 9th, 2008 11:21 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tamabonotchiThat's right, new chapter out of my story! I've finally finished this new chapter after working on it everyday for a while. I couldn't do much because right now, I'm writing this large essay for school in science, and I really have to work more on it.
If you ever checked an early entry I made with a drabble, you'll see the event in the new chapter. I edited it some more because most of my drabbles, I put little detail because they're drabbles (Take the Haruki Puppet drabble- I have been dreaming of the whole thing in detail, but I was pretty much summarizing the thing in my single drabble last entry). I really made Hinata's Story just to share these next chapters, because I'm rather crazy like that.
And on the TamaYuki note: I'm worried people will seriously not read if they seriously took that comment. I just said that because really I wanted to focus this chapter on Hinata and/or Kiba, but instead 4/5 of the chapter is Yuki. I'm really acting like Kishimoto is doing with the Uchiha History Lesson. But just to clarify, TamaYuki is crack, and the story will be more on Hinata pairings. It's so good to say that. If people don't come look at this and take it seriously, I'm going cry.
It's half a hour until midnight- I'm going to sleep, or at least listen to some good Bleach music and more.
I've been rather obsessed with Miracle by Cascada, where I kept dreaming of Kibahina. I've also have been listening to Weird Al Yankovic parodies, lawl.
Check out my story at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4110371/1/Hinatas_Story!
The greatest review I've gotten yet on this story!
If you ever checked an early entry I made with a drabble, you'll see the event in the new chapter. I edited it some more because most of my drabbles, I put little detail because they're drabbles (Take the Haruki Puppet drabble- I have been dreaming of the whole thing in detail, but I was pretty much summarizing the thing in my single drabble last entry). I really made Hinata's Story just to share these next chapters, because I'm rather crazy like that.
And on the TamaYuki note: I'm worried people will seriously not read if they seriously took that comment. I just said that because really I wanted to focus this chapter on Hinata and/or Kiba, but instead 4/5 of the chapter is Yuki. I'm really acting like Kishimoto is doing with the Uchiha History Lesson. But just to clarify, TamaYuki is crack, and the story will be more on Hinata pairings. It's so good to say that. If people don't come look at this and take it seriously, I'm going cry.
It's half a hour until midnight- I'm going to sleep, or at least listen to some good Bleach music and more.
I've been rather obsessed with Miracle by Cascada, where I kept dreaming of Kibahina. I've also have been listening to Weird Al Yankovic parodies, lawl.
Check out my story at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4110371/1/Hinatas_Story!
The greatest review I've gotten yet on this story!
I've gotten the most useful critique from him! Yes, I was a little upset by both his opinions and what I've done in this story, I appreciated it very much.
-I understand how you and others don't like the foreign words I put. I can put less, but I'll still implement foreign words.
-Yes, Keizo told this to Hinata and Kiba. Shhhhhhh....
-Shhhhhh.....
-This I really thank-you for pointing out to me! True critique I need.
-How did you know?! =O
-[This mission had started only a little after Naruto left, so Kiba hasn't trained to his great ability he is now.]
With this, I can continue the story and use his review to fix it! <3 Again, thank-you very much.
-I understand how you and others don't like the foreign words I put. I can put less, but I'll still implement foreign words.
-Yes, Keizo told this to Hinata and Kiba. Shhhhhhh....
-Shhhhhh.....
-This I really thank-you for pointing out to me! True critique I need.
-How did you know?! =O
-[This mission had started only a little after Naruto left, so Kiba hasn't trained to his great ability he is now.]
With this, I can continue the story and use his review to fix it! <3 Again, thank-you very much.
